Zombie vs Vampire online story

Hi,

I don't know if this is the correct place for it (considering the topic says "Books", and I am talking about a site), so I'll post it here and hope it's OK. If not, please accept my apologies and feel free to delete this.

I started writing a zombie story myself and called it Zombie vs Vampire. It will be a series of stories until the ideas stop coming, and I plan to add at least one page per week.

The site is here:
http://www.lunds.us/stories/zombievsvampire/

I'd be very happy about any comments, either here (if this thread survives) or by using the contact form on my site.

Thanks!